THE WALK OF LIFE – PROMPT #57

Dear Old Dad

WORN OUT
Adventurin’ along, express by shoe leather
Drooping from sky another blood red sun
Ambled through life unbothered by weather
Always tomorrow until there are none
Daydreams stacked into years like cordwood
Old-fashioned barrel-aged 160 proof fire
A sundial sentinel keeps time on the hood
Maybe when I’m sober I’ll fix that flat tire
White ghost fog blurs the roadside
Thick as a sold-out ghost convention
For all the time I’ve spent curbside
Thought I’d deserve some honorable mention
So much time in high gear, year after year
It’s a wonder I’m still here at all
Now I’m old & broke down, need help around town
Dirty jokes and crusty tales for last curtain call
~ Randy Bell ~
THE WALK OF LIFE – PROMPT #57
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7 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. ManicDdaily
    May 27, 2012 @ 13:16:37

    “express by shoe leather.” My favorite express too – and fixing things tomorrow best time. k.

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  2. jlynn sheridan
    May 27, 2012 @ 17:01:29

    “For all the time I’ve spent curbside
    Thought I’d deserve some honorable mention.”
    This phrase goes straight to the heart. You ended with a bang and I felt the “worn out.”

    Reply

  3. wordsandthoughtspjs
    May 28, 2012 @ 19:59:13

    “A sundial sentinel keeps time on the hood
    Maybe when I’m sober I’ll fix that flat tire
    White ghost fog blurs the roadside”

    Randy, I really like the emotion packed in those lines.

    Pamela

    Reply

  4. ansuyo
    May 30, 2012 @ 11:36:54

    Nice!

    Reply

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