Poetics: Foreign Tongues

Jose Cuervo Centenario #2

Nogales Misadventure

An hour south of Tucson, AZ

just over the border, lies Nogales, Mexico.

It’s saturday and the usual parade of

turistas are browsing vendor stalls.

hace mucho calor pero está muy agradable

I stop, y hablo con mi nuevo amigo.

el señor translates my name, which turns out

to be, a combo of Sun-god and bull. Raul !

in my best gringo lingo, I say

“buscando para comprar el último blanket, donde está?”

With a grin, wide as his straw sombrero, he smiles

and gives me dirección, I walk. Everyone is

selling something. Along the way,

as pollos dart across street,

I stop for a cold cerveza plus

a shot of tequila! All gringos comprende tequila

which is international for “let’s get drunk”!

after dos horas, ¡Zócalo! my wallet is gone !

no estoy preocupado, porque with my heavy NY accent,

I’m sure they’ll let me back into the good ol’ US of A !

© ~ Randy Bell ~ 2013

Today Fred aka hobgoblin2011 who’s tending bar @ dVerse Poet’s Pub

has asked us to incorporate foreign language into our writing !

Poetics: Foreign Tongues

20 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. brian miller
    Jan 19, 2013 @ 18:45:51

    haha you can hope…been there…and while your wife looks at jewelry they get you loaded so you make a stupid decision…what a sales technique…smiles…did you find your blanket?

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  2. jlynn sheridan
    Jan 19, 2013 @ 19:47:05

    Me gusta tu poema.

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  3. HisFireFly
    Jan 19, 2013 @ 19:56:28

    love the picture too!

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  4. Gretchen Leary
    Jan 19, 2013 @ 20:11:57

    I like how you really wove the Spanish and English together here. The blend smoothly. Sounds like a fun time :)

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  5. zongrik
    Jan 19, 2013 @ 20:18:56

    all gringos comprende tequilla that’s funny, and they understand cerveza, at least by concept.

    Bichon Frise

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  6. hobgoblin2011
    Jan 19, 2013 @ 20:26:50

    nicely done. Love the slipping in the NYC accent, that was a great touch. Yeah, shouldn’t have a problem getting back in. Fun piece, sorry to hear about the wallet. Sounds like a great time up until that part for you. Again, a very enjoyable read. Very nicely done. Thanks for sharing tonight.

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  7. ManicDdaily
    Jan 19, 2013 @ 20:57:17

    Yes! Agree with Fred – the NYC accent very charming at the close, and a lot of charm throughout. k.

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  8. hiroshimem
    Jan 19, 2013 @ 21:32:50

    Really funny! I love how you used code-switching and made it really easy to understand! Good ending too.

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  9. Heaven (@asweetlust)
    Jan 19, 2013 @ 21:53:20

    Enjoyed this share, specially the part of the tequila shot, let’s get drunk ~

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  10. pandamoniumcat
    Jan 19, 2013 @ 22:42:49

    Really enjoyed this…great combination of languages. Yeah everyone understands the meaning of tequila… ;)

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  11. Polly Robinson
    Jan 20, 2013 @ 03:27:28

    ‘It’s saturday and the usual parade of / turistas are browsing vendor stalls.’ The world over, people identify with this … cool poem :)

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  12. lucychili
    Jan 20, 2013 @ 04:00:38

    m know how that feels, it happened to me in barcelona which i loved apart from losing my bag =)

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  13. Kelvin S.M.
    Jan 20, 2013 @ 04:24:25

    …ha, i can read this with an accent…mexican language is quite similar to spanish and in a way some terms have been adapted by Philippines…like turistas…we do used this as part of our tagalog dialect to address a tourist…cerveza to us is ice cream or sorbetes…a delicacy sa tag araw…amigo / amiga to us is kumpadre / kumare…and a lot more…gracias for a very entertaining piece… smiles…

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  14. Tony
    Jan 20, 2013 @ 13:42:53

    Really enjoyed this weave of English and Spanish. Sorry about the wallet, but that happens a lot – just ask Tom Lehrer!

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  15. The Happy Amateur
    Jan 20, 2013 @ 17:18:00

    I hope tequila was good :-) A fun poem.

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  16. jasmine calyx
    Jan 21, 2013 @ 00:11:12

    I loved reading your Tex-Mex aloud! Now this is the language I speak. I’m from San Antonio, so every sentence contains an even mixture of both languages. You mastered it, my friend. :)

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  17. Pamela
    Jan 23, 2013 @ 23:16:24

    “buscando para comprar el último blanket, donde está?” Good heavens that made me laugh. Thanks for that. I enjoyed your stroll down el camino de recuerdos. Good one.

    Pamela

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